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Every Perfect Flaw
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:23:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There's nothing here to see
Nothing but a faint memory
Of the girl you knew
Well that girl isn't me
I can't remember how it felt
To feel that way
Did you know how hard I tried
To bury the pain deep inside
So maybe you'd know
That for you I can hide
I don't know how it always came
So easily
Well why'd I have to go and change
And turn into somebody
That I didn't ask to be?
Why did I have to go insane
And become a nervous twitch
That you don't wanna be with?
Why can't I close my eyes and take back
Everything I used to have
When it was perfect?
Why couldn't it all just stay the same
When there was no one to blame
And it was perfect?
I lost my heart back there
Fell into the wreckage somewhere
And when my mind went
I gave in to despair
I can't remember how it feels
To be happy
When it all falls away
I let you in and there you'll stay
And I feel the things
I don't have words to say
I don't know how to let it go
I'm too afraid
Well why'd I have to go and change?
I couldn't see through your eyes
I never understood why
Why did I have to go insane?
Never meant to push away
I'll bring those days back someway
I'll open my eyes and see the truth
Of that girl in the phone booth
So perfectly flawed
I'll look around me till I find you
There among the residue
With every little perfect flaw
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-11-24 19:23:10]
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:28:30 PM AEST
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Great writing!
It's hard sometimes but determination will get us thru.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 10:34:38 PM AEST
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| wow.... very good Moonlit!! |
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 10:35:15 PM AEST
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| dearest dee, ahhh life, this is such a vivid write, your note sad but very catchy, this poem made me think of many things, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by harshreality on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:15:06 PM AEST
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| beautiful. Theres some 1 in my life that makes me feel the same way. |
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:49:15 PM AEST
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Dee such a heartfelt sad and truthful write here you bared your soul with such greatness. I hope all works out well for you these feeling are so very hard.
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by juliette on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:03:08 AM AEST
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This poem touched me deeply because I can so relate to how you feel. In your angst remember that it takes two to make or break love and unconditional love lasts right on through those "perfect flaws". I bet you took alot of crap off of whoever you wrote this about. It breaks my heart that we are left to feel so guilty in the end. Beautiful write!! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:38:14 AM AEST
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Great write, Moonlit....very touching..Hope all is well with you...
Hugs
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:00:52 PM AEST
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| This one kinda hit close to home hon. I really liked this write. Very damn good. |
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Re: Every Perfect Flaw
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:26:38 AM AEST
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| A very well written poetry :-) Great job on this! |
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