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Solitude is Long and Green
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:37:34 PM in AEST
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Solitude is Long and Green
Like carrots. Carrots? you say. Yes, carrots that have been in solitude under your fridge for waay too long, moldy. I see you turn at that… “What do you think, Obo?” He is confused. Ideas and concepts can rarely outlast his attention span. “Can I eat ‘em?” he mumbles, eyes pleading. Bouncing up and down, your sister enters the room just then. “I just grew massive breasts!” she exclaims. It was true. Obo turns his attention to the roundular, oval objects, and says, “Can I eat ‘em?” 'Really, Obo, that is too much,' I say, but I can hardly blame someone who sleeps with a snowy owl perched on his nose. No matter, your sister obliges in front of us all, shedding her seamless shirt and parading, chest stuck out like a proud, proud peacock. Obo is intent. He takes an olive from beside the carrots, lights some sweetgrass, and prowls around her, knees partially bent. She kneels, tilting her head back, breasts lolling. A crazed look of intense concentration and pleasure upon his unassuming countenance, Obo balances the olive skillfully on her nose. “Wait.” he commands. She waits, and waits, and waits.
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Re: Solitude is Long and Green
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:10:26 PM AEST
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I liked it very odd but good nonetheless...
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Re: Solitude is Long and Green
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by doug on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:10:03 AM AEST
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i likes it though it was not like anything im used to, but thats a good thing
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