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No Victory
Contributed by
Terry_Stephen_Driscoll
on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 04:35:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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With the dawn in retreat
As the sun kissed her skin,
The soldier of love
Spoke of conflict within.
Of songs discontented
Mistaken in tune,
A universe void
Of a sun for her moon.
Her blood turned to acid
And burned through her eyes,
Intending to counter
Her lover's goodbyes.
She twisted her voice
As her feelings entwined
With emotional serpents
Of the constricting kind.
Then armoured her heart
For revenge at all cost,
Knowing all's not for winning
Her battle was lost.
His head fell in pity
His hands cupped his face
Unhanding the sword
That was free of disgrace
As warring hearts suffer
we witness the fall
Of armies of lovers
No victory to call.
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Terry_Stephen_Driscoll
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2003-11-24 16:35:04]
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Re: No Victory
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by norticus on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 04:39:49 PM AEST
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Is this about sex or am I just a big perv?
4.6 on the Nortiscale
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Re: No Victory
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 04:47:20 PM AEST
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Very good writing, my friend!
huggs, luv,
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