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Panties
Contributed by
MarcoTheFish
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:33:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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run away to happiness
there's nothing left
in the land
of a thousand deaths
of dreams
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next time you look at me
you'll disconnect to leave
but i know that the cord
is too long
for you to ever run away
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cover my shame
in towels soaked in pain
just once more you can
believe in eternity
eternity with a nothing
surrounding your body
engulfing your mind
Mindless.
Copyright ©
MarcoTheFish
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2003-11-24 15:33:58]
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Re: Panties
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:36:57 PM AEST
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very good, really loved this poem.
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Re: Panties
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by mckayla on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:38:12 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this!!!!!! Although I was expecting something totally diff with the title
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Re: Panties
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:51:33 PM AEST
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Hi panties,
This is very good, creative writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy
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Re: Panties
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by norticus on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 04:19:54 PM AEST
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It took me a while to understand this and that, I love. I was impressed, and I am a surly old man that is hardly impressed at anything these days. I give it a 5 on the Nortiscale.
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