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Boxer Briefs
Contributed by
MarcoTheFish
on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:29:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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trust these lines
to reveal
my passion
and the explosions
i experienced
when we first met
and the anger
when you walked off
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i got your letter
on my birthday
i found out
you didn't wait for me
you moved on
as expected
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in the silence
of passing cars
and my own watch
ticking away
i could almost touch
ecstasy
but my arms
were never long enough
Copyright ©
MarcoTheFish
... [
2003-11-24 15:29:03]
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Re: Boxer Briefs
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by mckayla on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:40:49 PM AEST
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Very emotional write. Very good! Once again the title tricked me!!!LoL
mckayla |
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Re: Boxer Briefs
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:55:02 PM AEST
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Interesting title.
Good work even tho sad.
Hang tuf!
It happens to moist of us at times.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Boxer Briefs
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by InteruptedFate on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:25:52 PM AEST
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| good write... i like it, alot. |
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Re: Boxer Briefs
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by SkYYBLu on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 09:38:54 PM AEST
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| Wow! This is good... ...I know exactly how you feel... |
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