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My Life

Contributed by Nessa_Lee on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:01:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I hide in this mask
no one knows me
Don't you just wish for
one day,
you could see life
through my eyes?
I see it
looking terrible!
I give in to cutting
not to watch
myself die, but
to take my anger
out on myself & watch
the pain bleed out.
I stare at the world
through my eyes
with a daze
You think I'm okay
But i'm not!
I need you!
Even when it seems
as though I don't
I do!
I wanna leave!
Whats stopping me?
I dunno
Why can't I just
up & end it?
Maybe that would've
been easier for
everyone
in the begining.

Copyright © Nessa_Lee ... [ 2003-11-24 14:01:15]
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Re: My Life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:21:30 PM AEST
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Very good writing altho very sad.
U might think u r bleeding out the pain but honey it don't work that way. If it did u wouldn't have to keep cutting.
You may think they would be better off without u but I'm sure u r wrong. No one wants to see their luved ones do this or to commit suicide.
If the people around u don't help then go to the emergency room of a hospitle and tell them and ask them to get u some help!
U don't have to suffer alone and they have medication that will make u feel like life is worth living.
Please don't stop till u get help!
I'm putting u in my prayers.
huggs, luv,
emy

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