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Father To Daughter
Contributed by
seanna_9
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 09:54:06 AM in AEST
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Well daughter, I'll tell you:
Life ain't been no paved road,
It's had pot holes in it,
And bumps,
And some mud puddles too,
And places where there ain't no turn arounds-
Driveways.
But in some places
I'se been a smooth part,
And take it,
And it gets better,
But sometimes road construction up ahead
Where there needs to be workin' on.
So girl, don't turn back.
Don't take a short cut
'Cause short cuts are even harder.
Don't worry now-
I'se others still goin' honey,
Taken the hard road,
And life for me ain't been no paved road.
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 10:56:04 AM AEST
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AWW this is very sweet,a touching gift!
Christina |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:10:13 AM AEST
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(((( Cena)))) I have tears running down my face. Live hasn't been a paved road for me. But the love of my children has made each and every bump more that worth it. I love you, Annie, Kathy, Brandon and Tori more that life itself. Thank you sweetheart
Dad |
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by sniffels on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 07:19:32 PM AEST
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very nicely written cena. i don't think anyone has had a nicely paved road without a bump in it. very nice advise both of you!!! love ya,
kathy |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 04:57:10 AM AEST
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| ohhhh this is dear, your love for your dad is so beautiful, i love mine too, we cannot see each other much as we are in different states, i miss those father daughter talks so much, *boo hoo*, hug your dad extra tight next time:) ~hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by suzie007uk on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:15:31 PM AEST
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| nothing else could be better than reading this poem with words so truly felt well done |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by Mikayla on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 08:50:56 PM AEST
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good job!
i liked it! |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by car21221 on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:31:03 PM AEST
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| pretty nice good writing |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by chanceof_promise on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 03:26:35 PM AEST
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| i like that a lot.. |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by vahtang on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:29:36 AM AEST
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by Alexa_Bachtel on
Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 04:57:46 AM AEST
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I don't know how did you know, but my father once told me the same words, but I ain't listened to him that time and got burned. Sometimes I remind his words and regret that I hadn't. Great work.
Alexa. |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Friday, 27th November 2009 @ 08:03:36 AM AEST
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This would probably be a great greeting card. This is hopefully every father's advice to his little girl. God bless,
Deidra |
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Re: Father To Daughter
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by kmec1990 on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 08:03:12 AM AEST
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| Touching |
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