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Inside the Stone
Contributed by
phildel
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Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 09:22:15 AM in AEST
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I live within a block of gray stone,
Two carved out holes to see the light
Strapped within a silver throne
As you pace the room, throughout the night.
I wait in silence, watch the walls
In case they move or speak to me
I know there'll be no shopping malls
Or sweets, unless you set me free.
If I ever escaped, I'd tear you to shreds
Carve hearts out of mountains, upon the plaine,
I'd blow you across the grass lands like paper
Then leave you to wilt, in the pouring rain.
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phildel
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2002-08-26 09:22:15]
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Re: Inside the Stone
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 01:38:25 PM AEST
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There's so much anger and hopelessness in this, but writing all of that down is therapeutic... good write!
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Re: Inside the Stone
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by Ronald on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 06:06:06 PM AEST
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| Such a sad poem... By tthe way, you express yourself or the emotions well. I love it... Keep it up pal! :-) |
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Re: Inside the Stone
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by chatabox on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 10:26:50 PM AEST
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you may be surprised to find that it isnt like this atall when you emerge.....go on give it a try.
A very emotional piece of writing. |
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Re: Inside the Stone
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by Phildel on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 12:42:08 AM AEST
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I've been trying to emerge for so long! The piece is based on my dads over protectiveness, but i shall continue to try.. thanku very much for the comments.
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Re: Inside the Stone
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by Phildel on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 12:42:57 AM AEST
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Thanks very much Ronald!
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Re: Inside the Stone
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by Phildel on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 12:45:02 AM AEST
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Thanks for your comments Ginsdance,
It's true that my writings therapeutic! I did write this when I was in tears a couple of days ago, perhaps I'll do it more in future.
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Re: Inside the Stone
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by trinity_love500 on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 11:36:50 AM AEST
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Gosh, I would not like to be the person you aim this at! But then...I wouldn't ever trap anyone in a stone, harsh.
Great poem, very emotional.
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