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gary
Contributed by
tWiStEd
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:41:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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your eyes is like a sun
making my day so bright
your lips is like a rose
that blooms in winter's time
your smile is like a wind
which brings calmness to the sea
your hand is like a rainbow
that touches my soft skin
your voice is like a sweet song
that lull me to sleep
and most of all...
your face is like an angel
whispering to me
"i am always with you"
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tWiStEd
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2003-11-24 02:41:00]
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Re: gary
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by MrWrite on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:42:29 AM AEST
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| Great use of simile. Very descriptive. Great write. |
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Re: gary
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 09:52:53 AM AEST
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mmmmm...sweet!
Very tender!
Sharon |
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