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soft wind
Contributed by
tWiStEd
on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:26:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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soft wind, where are you?
i long for your warm touch
soft wind, where did you go?
gone in a second, you were just here
soft wind, please come back
hold me in your arms
soft wind, will you ever stay?
'till morning clouds turns to gray
soft wind, soft wind
when will i hear you whisper in my heart?
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tWiStEd
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2003-11-24 02:26:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: soft wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by MrWrite on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:39:07 AM AEST (User
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Wow. I've experienced something like that myself, and seeing it put into words like that was very powerful. If you'd like to talk, feel free to PM me. Once again, great job. |
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Re: soft wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmSal on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 05:34:02 AM AEST (User
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It's good to read that you don't wanna be like that. Nice peice.
Emma. |
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