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Who was the one

Contributed by Remi on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 12:56:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I taught how to ride your first bike I taught u how to throw your first punch who was the one that was my shallow for the first 11 yrs of their lives who was the one that would wait out side the girls bathroom door until i came out
who was the one
who was the one
I taught u how to tide your *****in shoes I was the one that had your back in the school I was the big sister u call out for everytime u were in trouble when a kids was gonna kick your ass in the hallways

Who was the one
Who was the one
Who was the one that share their food with u and everytime u drop your ice cream cone who was the one that gave up their and gave it to ya who was the one who was the one that were there for u all the time no question ask now that u hit 14 and u grow 6 inch over nite and now u can touch the celling with your hands u got the *****in audcety to step me like one of the ***** in the streets who was the one that put money your pocket when your dad wasn't who was the one that brought the 80 dollars shirt hundred dollars pain and the 150 dollars shoes all of stutton u think u the man cause u over 6 feet tall and u act like u lost your mind when u disrespet me by calling me a ***** and trying to put your hands in my face

Now u forgot how to respect me u got to show your ass in front of your boys trying to act like u in charge Now when I'm down instead of understanding u kick me when I'm down and u have amnesia and forgot the last 4 yrs I took care of your ass when your dad wasn't paying u no mind

Who was the one I was the ***** one, one day your ass gonna rememeber that to.

Remy Maskantinio

Copyright © Remi ... [ 2003-11-24 00:56:07]
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Re: Who was the one (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 03:28:48 PM AEST
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hope your brother learns to respect you and you two can get along. walk in peace and happiness your friend, doug

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