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Pure
Contributed by
Marco
on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 09:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You make me dirty make me feel like a whore
Right here where you want me down with the fleas in the floor
Still you tried to clean me bleach away like stains
Blackened ash in your mouth won’t distil your distain
It doesn’t matter when you say I’m not clean anymore
It doesn’t matter when you say I’m dirty like a whore
Here is nothing
Here is nothing
Here is nothing
For you there is nothing
pure
You've got to let it out!!!!!
It doesn’t matter when you say I’m not clean anymore
It doesn’t matter when you say I’m dirty like a whore
Copyright ©
Marco
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2003-11-23 21:34:13]
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Re: Pure
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by doug on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 10:24:53 PM AEST
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| this is excellent, your friend doug |
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Re: Pure
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 10:57:18 PM AEST
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Very good writing, here!
luv the style.
peace, joy, luv, pure,
emy |
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Re: Pure
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by EmSal on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:25:41 AM AEST
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You tell them! If it's like that then it is good to say goodbye...for the best...good write...take care.
Emma.
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