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Take Me Away God
Contributed by
echomywurdz
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Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:42:38 PM in AEST
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Save me god for i have loved
Kill me now and take me above
Forgive that i have sined and cut
Just take me away before he wins,
Wins my heart a little more
Then pushes me away and calls me a whore
Afraid to show how we truely feel,
Tell me god is this real?
Save me god for i have loved
Kill me now and take my blood
Hurry please i know he'll hurt me soon
But i cant help but love this fool
Save me god for i am hurt
Help me get away from this jerk
He beat me with his enclosed fist
All because i didn't suceed his wish
Take me now for i am in pain
Take me away from this man who now seems lame
Save me god for i am dead
He took a gun and beat me in the head
I am now buried some where in the ground
Now i'm no where to be found
Maybe now you'll come for me
Save my soul, let me free
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Re: Take Me Away God
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:21:35 PM AEST
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I'm not sure if this is a reference to Chrisitanity or not, but that's how I interpreted it. If it is what I think it is, I agree totally.... God's the only one that can take us away from the tyrrany of Satan... you're absolutely right. Why anyone would go along with him is beyond me.... God's got the powah =)
Great write. I especially liked that last line--- save my soul, let me free. That's exactly what God does.... he frees us....
God bless ; )
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Re: Take Me Away God
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:34:39 PM AEST
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Very good analogy of feelings.
I hope this is jus writing but jus in case u will be in my prayers as of right now!
God will lead u thru 2 freedom from the evil that trys 2 destroy. Run from him and don't look back!
peace, joy, luv, freedom,
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Re: Take Me Away God
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by InteruptedFate on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 06:37:58 PM AEST
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damn, you got issues... but its a VERY VERY good write. i loved it. ive read all your poems, and if you ever need someone to talk to, im right here. you seem like someone id like. kir.
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