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Dreams of a wish
Contributed by
13Hopes
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Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 11:01:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Deep within my dreams at night, my thoughts of you seem so right. Together we walk with unlimited time, holding your hand to places unseen, complete as now, never have i been. Within your arms there is peace, a strange calm. I look into your eyes, i am lost in your charm. All my fears in this worldly place get washed away when i look upon your face. So many questions but it all seems clear are washed away when you come near. I hear your voice it rides the whispering wind. I lose my resolve, i can only give in. I have this dream i gave you a key, to wake and find you lying next to me. I began a tale i can no longer write. To walk away, yes i have tried, i keep the lost fight. You do what you want, you do what you do, i cant explain. My memoris of you will always remain. Time and space unwillingly will not change. My heart wishes our timing had been kind. I hoped your love is what i would find. My prayers, you never speak the words goodbye.
You are someone special, to find you was rare. I open my eyes, wake from my dream only to find you arent there. My eyes now open, a new page in time, only to wait, what is to be seen...
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Re: Dreams of a wish
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:02:29 PM AEST
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Very good writing but I'm not familar with the read book.
great work.
peace, joy, luv, hope,
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Re: Dreams of a wish
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:58:25 PM AEST
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So gentle a write... like a new flower in the spring, so delicate.... At the beginning the tone is so dreamy.
I like it ; )
God bless,
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