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Not here with me
Contributed by
gery_giggles
on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 09:34:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I can't be by your side
I close my eyes and imagine
I'm in your arms tonight.
Maybe if i never open them
I wont feel the pain of losing you,
I'm drowning in my fearful pain.
Your beautiful eyes haunt my dreams,
how could i of let you go?
Love is such a dangeous game,
I thought i had it figured out,
but now that your so far,
I can't seem to find the end
or the beginning.
If i close my eyes i can imagine
I'm by your side.
I can still feel your touch,
I can still say i love you.
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gery_giggles
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2003-11-23 09:34:08]
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Re: Not here with me
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by mckayla on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 12:16:49 PM AEST
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Beautifully written!
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Re: Not here with me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:10:32 PM AEST
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I here every word of this!
I think our fear of luv is our bigest obsticle.
Good work, you've capttured your feelings well.
peace, joy, luv, hope,
emy |
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Re: Not here with me
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:38:04 PM AEST
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| You can feel the pain and regret, and longing. Very well written. Nice job! |
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