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My sorrow
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:09:46 AM in AEST
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I have just learned sorrow.
One of three things
That I hoped never to learn
Sorrow, anger and hate
Are these things
Watching other make my mistakes
Brought to my knees with tears in my eyes
A young man was all it took
To hear his story to feel this
Had no choice nor a way out
Can’t care right now just wanting to die again
Holding myself is all that I have right now
Crying quietly to not disturb
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-11-23 06:09:46]
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Re: My sorrow
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:55:53 AM AEST
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| nice one my friend.... |
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Re: My sorrow
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:57:35 AM AEST
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So few words but yet so much said.This is very emotional,personal and I feel the pull of sorrow here.
Hold tight,light of day will come again.You are strong.I believe this!
Another excellent write!
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Re: My sorrow
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by 13Hopes on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 07:53:27 AM AEST
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Sorrow is an emotion that is needed to keep us open hearted to others in need, then inturn they will be there for us!!!
Nice write!!!
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Re: My sorrow
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 12:52:15 PM AEST
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Dear Cobalt,
Your focus on this one was very intent!
My heart was hurting and then it was bent!
Cobalt, this was so personal I could tell.
Will you all right, and will he be as well?
Sadness, misery, hurtfuly delight! One line stood out for me. "Holding myself" I'd never thought of that before....of course we have to hold ourselves when there's no one there bu you!
Wonderful Cobalt!
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Re: My sorrow
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:23:16 PM AEST
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Heartfelt and touching... hang tuff, Jeff...you have been doing so well... stay strong, my friend... PM me if you want to talk...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: My sorrow
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 06:13:33 PM AEST
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| beautiful in its honesty.... |
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Re: My sorrow
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 10:20:19 PM AEST
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| knock knock........here is a hug.....sandy |
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Re: My sorrow
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by eternal_sorrows on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:35:31 AM AEST
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WOW! Beautiful write! Awesome imagery!
ES |
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