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Bottle of whiskey
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 12:03:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Into a bottle of whiskey I drown
my world is spinning round and round
I feel real sick
get me some more
whiskey really quick
Into a bottle of whiskey I drown
Letting my world go down
everythings a big blur suddenly
I'm fading out of this place
I feel as if I'm in another time in space
I hear voices but not sure whose
I am talking , but don't know what I'm saying
Into a bottle of whiskey I drown
fading in and out I hit the ground
JENNA
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Re: Bottle of whiskey
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 12:15:33 AM AEST
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Lmao.....thanks for sharing this...Now I don't feel too badly....hehehe... It remnded me of one of the 3 times that I've gotten drunk in my life...
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Re: Bottle of whiskey
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by 13Hopes on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 08:53:37 AM AEST
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I hate hangovers, love a drink......
A good drink is always better with good friends...
Smiling after reading this...
Cheers
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Re: Bottle of whiskey
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 05:25:15 PM AEST
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i love this i can relate to that place you speak of, i love the flow i might add, smooth as the
whiskey you speak of, a nice earthy write jenn . . .
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