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The Dark Ends of Shadows
Contributed by
Rissa
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Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:40:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Always a week behind,
Gone off and lost my mind,
Can't win, no one cares,
I've been caught unaware.
They overlook me,
Forget what they see,
I can't turn back now,
Move my gaze from the ground.
Can't escape from the fray,
Live through another day,
Only to start again,
Repetition: Man's Best Friend.
They don't really care,
'cause they've never been there.
I've broken the vow,
Lost myself in the crowd.
Can't see through the rain,
Disregarding pain,
Conveying with hate,
To reach out and touch Fate.
Brough to my knees,
But they're deaf to my pleas.
I can't find my way,
The End starts today.
Copyright ©
Rissa
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2003-11-22 22:40:43]
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Re: The Dark Ends of Shadows
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:27:02 AM AEST
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very good write ... keep up the good work
peace and joy
JENNA |
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Re: The Dark Ends of Shadows
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by Eve on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 05:29:45 PM AEST
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| Still love this one, Catteh. Keep it up. =D |
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Re: The Dark Ends of Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:30:08 PM AEST
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Intriguing regime for inspiration. If I forced myself to rescind for a week, I'd probably forget to pick up a poetry thought for 2. Like me.
However bold, it strikes a chord, and I like the ending. Neat and tidy. |
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