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Dreams of Desire
Contributed by
Joy
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Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:07:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Moonlight on the water
Stars are piercing down.
We lie on a blanket,
With no one around.
Your eyes look deeply down into my soul;
If you look much deeper,
I could lose control.
The wind through the trees
Makes a magical sound,
Like natures own windchimes,
The music's profound.
Beauty surrounds us as we talk until dawn.
We share loves first kiss,
Then waking, the dream is gone.
Copyright ©
Joy
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2003-11-22 22:07:15]
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Re: Dreams of Desire
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by sugar0986 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:18:24 PM AEST
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good poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Dreams of Desire
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:33:52 AM AEST
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very well put.. i've had these dreams before myself lol great write!
peace and joy
JENNA |
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Re: Dreams of Desire
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:45:54 PM AEST
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Ahhh, love is beautiful isn't it?
Very nice write.
*S* Cynthia |
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