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Incandescent Watermelons
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:35:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Quit... I've got to
quit
it...
Or so say they
Say! I've got
it!
screws my vocabulary
up, down town
to do so, and
the Mara, Mara, Marijuana
Wanna Marry
Me?
No? then we shall wait --
SHALL we wait
until
The luminescent amber moon
is drowned beneath the see
You sea?
And the fading purple of your fingernails
Hails me to life's
Vulnerability,
Fertility, and
Safe Sex must never be forgotten --
EVER -- be forgotten
When talking to the girl across the hall
with the incandescent watermelons.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2003-11-22 20:35:44]
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Re: Incandescent Watermelons
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:47:47 PM AEST
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* climbs off the giant purple hooka mushroom and grins like the cheshire cat* that is exactly what I was thinking ...
Mmmmm juicy watermellons, is it dangerous to eat the seeds?
lol great poem great layout, I love the rhythm of the rhyme and how the structure contradicts it.....
where are my nacho's.... |
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Re: Incandescent Watermelons
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 09:29:49 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this very much!!! Great Job!
mckayla |
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