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Salient; Nothing
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:20:36 PM in AEST
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Suicidal thresholds
can hold unbridled
potential, but
exponential the chances are,
one will not go through with it.
Oh sh*t,
I’ve got to go,
I’ve got to run
myself through
This icicle so salient,
so radiant, I felt
it impale,
then melt
until there is nothing left;
I have left
Nothing.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2003-11-22 20:20:36]
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Re: Salient; Nothing
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:55:23 PM AEST
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| I like the wording of this poem plus I really felt the emotion in it and the lack of it |
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Re: Salient; Nothing
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:54:40 PM AEST
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As you know Lane I love this. Good stuff man.
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