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Dawn
Contributed by
Gerry
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Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:11:15 PM in AEST
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Dawn
I met this girl 3 years ago,
She was the highlights in my eye.
I wanted her to be with me,
Until the day I die.
I loved her for who she was,
I loved her for what she did for me.
She has been my perfect girl,
If you knew her, you'd agree.
As time went by, I lost control,
And took it out on her.
I hurt her once, I hurt her twice,
I hurt her more and more.
It wasn't what I meant to do,
My mind has been a blur.
Now that I have hurt her,
I dont know what to do.
I do not want to lose this girl,
But I have made her feel blue.
Now since this has happened,
I have prepared to fix my mind.
I really need to show this girl,
That I can once again be kind.
I don't know why I have been this way,
To a girl I love so much.
I know I really need this girl,
Be able to feel her touch.
Now I have god in my corner,
To help me show the way.
I have to show this girl I love her,
And won't hurt her another day.
Now I don't ask for sorrow,
Even though I weep.
I know that when I go to bed at nite,
Her hurt won't let me sleep.
.I take all my days and think of her,
And regret what I have done.
I feel I have to show this girl,
That the new me has begun
I pray this girl will wait for me,
To see what time will offer her.
For her it will happiness,
A promise I'll keep for sure.
For the girl that I speak of,
A girl thats name is Dawn.
I love you so very much,
And will until I'm gone.
I met this girl 3 years ago,
She is the highlights in my eye.
I still want to be with her,
Until the day I die.
Gerry,
11/19/03
Copyright ©
Gerry
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2003-11-22 20:11:15]
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Re: Dawn
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 03:18:50 AM AEST
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Whoah this is nice...not that you hurt her, but that you care enough to make it right and to show her what she means even if it is a little too late. I have been in the same situation as Dawn but I couldn't go back, but I hope that everything works out for you. This was great thanks for sharing it. All the best now.
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Re: Dawn
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:03:53 PM AEST
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Love is a very fragile thing. But your transparency may repair it.
It may take years
bob |
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