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Regret
Contributed by
punkwthn
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:35:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Leaves fall from dead trees
And slowly meet the earth.
Reminding her of tears long
Ago shed.
She smiles in pain and laughs
Without mirth.
Her heart feeling as if it's
Made of lead.
The cold bites at her hands and she
Realizes his are impossible to take.
Rather than brought on by the snow,
Around him she feels numb.
The memories begin to stir and
Her insides continue to ache.
She smiles sadly and wonders if
Her day will ever come.
Copyright ©
punkwthn
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2003-11-22 17:35:14]
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Re: Regret
(User Rating: 1 )
by burdened on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:42:41 PM AEST
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the first line is not "odd," it's wonderful! This made me hold my breath
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Re: Regret
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 06:07:58 PM AEST
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This is really good....
Jenni |
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