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Break Me Down
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:46:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Roaring, breaking as I fade
Break me down
Tear my skin off
Throw my eyes down
Rip off my abilities
Toss them to the ground
Make me into something
Break me into anything
Break me down from where I am
Tear me apart
Crack me over your knee
Toss me in the hole
Break me down tomorrow
As you have torn me up today
Break me down for some reason
A reason so lost its way
Permit me to touch you
Reach out and grab
I'll let you take my awful heart
You can reach back and stab
Rip me to pieces and break my will to be
Break me down tomorrow
Destroy me
Throw me around to nothing
Drag me across the floor
Trails of blood behind you
Rip me up so much more
Smile as I stain you
Flesh so crimson red
Break me over three long months
Break me down to dead
Break me down
And let me fall
Leave me here to rot away
Walk away from my body
I give you my all
Break me into something
Leave me where I lie
Lie to me tomorrow
Let my ripped up body die
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Re: Break Me Down
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 01:49:15 PM AEST
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| A strong write and quite graphic I enjoyed reading it |
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Re: Break Me Down
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 01:50:11 PM AEST
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I definatley say I have felt like this many times. Great write!
mckayla
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Re: Break Me Down
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 04:40:47 PM AEST
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you've made me cry.... this just fits so well, i know what im on about...
im sorry |
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