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Broken
Contributed by
bleedingXrose
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 09:17:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Broken life
Broken heart
Broken girl
Torn apart
Broken way
Broken soul
Broke world
That was never whole
Tearing eyes
Fearing ways
Scarring wounds
Burn and blaze
Leave me alone
Leave me be
Cause I'm not worthy
Of your sympathy
Copyright ©
bleedingXrose
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2003-11-22 09:17:09]
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Re: Broken
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by Alexander_McDonald on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 09:27:34 AM AEST
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I liked your poem. Reminds me of my own.
Write from the heart. Even if it hurts to read... Gotta let out the pain.
Alex. |
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Re: Broken
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by SkYYBLu on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 10:09:46 AM AEST
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Ditto. Good write. So short, yet describes so much pain. Keep 'em comin'! |
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Re: Broken
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:27:02 PM AEST
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| very good, I can relate. |
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Re: Broken
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by deadly_blaZe on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:17:53 PM AEST
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Short But Sweet. Very Nice. Cant Wait 4 More
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