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Marvelous Eyes
Contributed by
venkat
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Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 06:35:19 AM in AEST
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The right eye causes the day time
With the sun as its lord
The left eye causes the night time
With the moon as its lord
O Mother of the Universe! Mother of all!
Your third eye on the fore head above
Resembling a golden lotus slightly opened
Is responsible for the twilight
In the morning and the evening!
All glory to thy wide and auspicious eyes
Brilliantly clear undefeated even by blue lilies
Long and offering protection to the world
With continuous flow of thy grace!
O Mother Divine! O Mother supreme!
At Shiva the Lord, the expression of
Thy look is beautiful with the sentiment of love;
At goblins and demigods with dislike;
And at demons with that of anger;
At hearing of the great deeds of the Lord
With that of the wonder;
At the sight of your comrades
The goddess of speech and the goddess of beauty
With that of the light hearted sympathy;
And at me a devotee with great compassion!
Great men say that the closing and
Opening of thy eye-lids mark the dissolution
And the creation of this universe
Therefore it must be to prevent the universe
that has sprung at the time of opening of thy eyes
from going into dissolution that Thou
doest not wink but keeps thy eyes always open!
O Mother Divine! O Mother Supreme!
May Thou always look at us with glances of grace!
22-11-2003
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 06:51:39 AM AEST
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Excelent!
luv, hugs,joy,
emy |
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 07:01:57 AM AEST
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A marvelous poem sir,
with regards
Snigdha |
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 07:04:57 AM AEST
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Beautiful words, Beautiful lady, and Beautiful imagery!
Wonderful write VenKat
lovingcritters
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by Aika on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 07:08:31 AM AEST
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What else to say?
Marvelous, sir!
Caressed my soul
pampered my heart.. :-) aika:-)
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 07:22:45 AM AEST
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| I read this and was blessed with colours..beautiful! |
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 07:48:12 AM AEST
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a joy for the spirit
Shari |
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:10:11 AM AEST
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Very enjoyable and pictorially sound.
Excellrnt
Regards
Terry
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:43:06 AM AEST
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Well done, my friend.....
Jenni |
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:42:03 PM AEST
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beautiful Venkat
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by chandramohan on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 06:09:19 AM AEST
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mothers gracious looks on us will createheaven for us..if she closes her eyes only dark will prevail before us
let us pray mothre goddess to have gracious look on us and on the entire universe..
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 01:20:48 PM AEST
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| Venkat... For some reason this made my head spin. It was incredible. I missed this one before... Hehe. I wish I hadn't |
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Re: Marvelous Eyes
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by desertrose on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 06:32:26 PM AEST
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Great poem Have you thought of using stanzas in your poems.You write so well that the use of stanzas would make the poems ever a better read
By the way you remarked my poem was cute it talked of depression ?
Confused
Rose
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