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SHOW ME HOW
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 06:30:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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From the results of my youth
this little girl sadly hurt you.
Now knowing, hows and whys
gotta learn love, somehow.
Didn't plan lonely life.
Sorrow, pain, strife.
This little girl just don't know how
to live over seeds to plow.
Yeah, you gotta know for sure
gotta live outside a bed, the manure.
Someone pull this plow
show me the way, somehow.
All this time you've stood beside me
set this wounded heart free.
Mend broken wings with love.
Teach me to fly like other doves.
So many others need to live
womanly love, receive and give.
Lessons for me come very hard.
Alone is a vessle cold, tired.
Take me past the thorns
Show this road in life to bloom.
Where ever my path may lead
this souls heart sometimes bleeds.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-11-22 06:30:48]
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Re: SHOW ME HOW
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 06:40:27 AM AEST
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Oh Emy, I can feel the heartbeats of your heart, and each time it does, it bleeds!
I was so happy to see the date, and realize it was written earlier and not late.
What a heartfelt broken hearted poem. I could just feel the pain, and remorse, or course, it's so hard to grow up and find the way. I hope it's smoothed out for you more in this day!
Beautiful write....I could really relate.
lovingcritters
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Re: SHOW ME HOW
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by venkat on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 06:41:25 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written ..this is still afresh. venkat |
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Re: SHOW ME HOW
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 07:20:01 AM AEST
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EXCELLENT!!
Held me with the depth of emotions...
I too am glad to see the date is past.Hope your road now is smooth and takes you far
Sharon |
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Re: SHOW ME HOW
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by eternal_sorrows on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:26:55 AM AEST
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Excellent write full of imagery. Your words paint a picture.
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