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Tattered Soul
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:15:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Enveloped in a shroud of blue,velvet to the touch
She walks the streets of deep despair,her breath,the softest hush
Cobblestones beneath her feet,naked as they stroll
Through alley ways of shadows,and the remnants of her soul
All about she searches,yet knows not what she seeks
For anything she ever held,was never hers for keeps
Still somehow she fumbles,falling through her days
But never does she ever forget,the one who couldn't stay
One winters night,near on dawn,before the waking of the sun
The dream she found,the life she had,came tragically undone
Sleeping in the arms of love,the man who held her heart
She awoke to find that in the night,his breathing did depart
Crying out for mercy,pleading all for goodness' sake
Grant to me this nightmare,but now allow my mind to wake
Nothing but the sorrow,an emptiness inside
She left the bed,the home they shared,her everything had died
Now every night near on dawn,before the morning light appears
She walks cobbled streets of shadows,hopes of death held near
For nothing could now matter,her only reason to ever breathe
Has left this earth without her,a tattered soul now grieves
She's at a loss for comfort,because the guilt has eaten through
This woman loved him more than life,but her heart he never knew
She took each kiss for granted,every meal they had shared
And now she wishes hopelessly,for a chance to show she cared
Upon the winds in winter,you can hear the fainted cries
Of a soul lost in the carnage of memories gone by
Listen to the weeping,to hear is not enough
Then say a prayer,give thanks to all,the many ones you love
For we never know our chosen time,its just not in our hands
But to love and appreciate all you have,can be a part of your daily plan
So take this moment,close your eyes,upon your world impart
All the appreciation for the ones who bless your very heart
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
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2003-11-22 02:15:21]
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:48:44 AM AEST
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| This was so beautiful.It's one of those that touches your heart you the kind that make you warm and fuzzy and gives you goose bumps. You are so talented. I did just what the last lines said. |
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:56:11 AM AEST
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wow!
very strong, gentle-n-luving!
peace. joy, luv
emy, |
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:25:28 AM AEST
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| Simply a marvelous poem! Strong and beautiful! Great Write. |
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:23:18 AM AEST
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| aww sharon now you're making me cry...and now I'm off to think about the one I let slip away. this write is better than amazing...it's...it's well I can't think of another word but it's better then amazing. I loved it so much. It touched me very deeply |
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 07:11:35 AM AEST
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Ah my dear friend,
how wonderful to once again read your heartfelt words...from your soul.
Yes, I know the feeling well, and when it happens....you are so shocked....you can't even tell nor speak to anyone about the love you have lost! Most exasperating, hopelessness, I've never felt since, and hope I never have too again.
Sad, Sharon, as your heart heals....but hope ful too...my dear....you are still shining through!
lovingtitters loves you....you're going to be just fine.
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 08:55:52 AM AEST
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Awww Whispers, this touched me so deeply. You have such a way with words. It is simply marvellous... Hope you are feeling better..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 04:06:47 PM AEST
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A bit of time didnt cool your pen ;o). This is typical LovingWhispers poetry....Soft, calming, and oh so beautiful. Nice to see you back Blondie :o)
Larry |
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:11:35 PM AEST
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| Oh my god hon... This brought tears to my eyes. I'm so glad I made the time today to be able to get on. Better to cry at home than at work. You are simply a breathtaking writer. By the way I swear you are getting even better... |
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 09:03:04 PM AEST
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| dearest sharon, this is beautifully written and sooo lovely:) you had my attention all the way through:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tattered Soul
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:37:36 AM AEST
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| Very touching. Loved every bit of it. Such talent you have. :) |
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