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Yesterday
Contributed by
Rachel
on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:35:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Yesterday you held me near
You confirmed my worst and greatest fear
You actually felt something for me
And thats how I always thought itd be
All you wanted in the world was me
Somehow we couldnt disagree
It was only me that you adored
Turns out yesterday you were just bored
You silently watched my cry
And had no need to question why
just took your hand, wipped the tears away
But all this happened yesterday
It was the day your lips brushed mine
Made me think it was some kind of sign
In the end though, its really not
No matter what it was I thought
And although I smiled yesterday
And you didnt treat me like a child yesterday
Today isnt at all like yesterday
Because you werent with her
And he wasnt wipping my tears away
Copyright ©
Rachel
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2003-11-22 00:35:40]
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Re: Yesterday
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:42:53 AM AEST
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Very creative1
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Yesterday
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 01:20:21 AM AEST
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| great write. I know how it feels to love a whishy washy person. there oneday gone the next and just when you think they won't be back they show up again. Not knowing kind of keeps you feeling unstable. goodluck |
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Re: Yesterday
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 05:43:44 AM AEST
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| This was close to a tear-jerker for me. This poem is so emotional and honest, I really loved it. It expresses your pain so very well and I love the way you structured it. I especially liked the ending and how you reffered to the past as yesterday. An amazing poem, you have great talent |
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