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Closing and Losing

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 10:47:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Closing time on my life
Closing all the doors and tossing all the keys

Losing my
Only way to think about you

Closing time on my life
Building all the barriers
Burning all the bridges

Losing my
Only way to inhibit my mind

Closing time of my life
Fragile yet and make me so

Making my
Only way to make it

Moving to the ocean
Meeting all the ends
Ends of the world
And ends to me

Float away to nowhere
Closing all the doors
Moving my feet to somewhere

Losing my
Only way to find you

Lock me from the house

Finding my way to meet you

Break all of the light bulbs
Pour water in all the sockets
Lose our light forever
Hide the key in our pockets

I know who I'm losing
And I know who I've found
I know who I'm searching for
And why my feet float off the ground

Closing down on my life
Just as clouds do

I think once I close myself on nothing
I think I'll come find you

Make my path and lose my way

Closing time on my life
Come so close to the edge

Closing down on eternity

Nothing lasts forever
But these feelings come so close

Closing down on my logic
Where I choose to open

Close this last door tomorrow
I could meet you today
Never knowing what happens
Life turns it's key in anyway




Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2003-11-21 22:47:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Closing and Losing (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 11:49:03 PM AEST
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Very artistic write.
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: Closing and Losing (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:12:55 AM AEST
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Wow I liked this...although a sensative subject. Great write thank you for sahring this. Take care.

Emma.




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