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Through The Mist
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 09:11:16 PM in AEST
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Gentle rain upon the meadows,falling to the ground
A symphony of soothing,in her lullabyllic sound
As I walk within the droplets,my hair in liquid strands
I too am cleansed and nourished,as is this beautiful land
Far across the way,through the mist of all that falls
Upon a branch of an old gum tree,a single magpie calls
His song of giving thanks,for the rains that bead on feathers
He and I ,within the storm,celebrate this beauty together
He eyes me now,as I venture closer,though he does not fly away
For this handsome spirit,proud and strong,knows my scent and stays
He remembers every offering,as the sun would find her place
Me standing by the wooded rails,my distance,a respectful space
Quietly we look at each,as though we speak with eyes
A softness falls upon his stance,and I am mesmerised
For in the distant silence,another call is heard
It is the homely song,of his love,his lady bird
One more look he casts to me,before he lifts his wings
Then up upon a tender breeze,he takes the song he sings
Calling through the mist,he seems to me,to say
You walk the earth,I fly the skies,but we were one today
Returning through the meadow,I tread softly on the earth
Silently,I must take each step,for the day has given birth
I hear contented sighs as she holds her newborn near
And realise all the raindrops,were her beautiful misty tears
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Re: Through The Mist
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 09:21:27 PM AEST
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Awwww... words wonderfully woven.... by a great poet.... Glad to see you posting again...
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Re: Through The Mist
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 09:55:23 PM AEST
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welcome back my friend a lovely write as always
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Re: Through The Mist
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by doug on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 10:10:43 PM AEST
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| this was wonderful reading |
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Re: Through The Mist
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 01:39:53 AM AEST
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this moved me to the very end of my soul, glad that your back!! I needed this tonight beautiful!!!!!!
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Re: Through The Mist
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 04:09:30 PM AEST
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Gorgeous :o)
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