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scitzosuicide
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
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Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 06:36:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In through the shadows,
Lingers my other half,
A dark grotesque figure,
Wearing a mask.
This unknown creature,
Creeps inside my head,
Twisting the facts,
To justify the dead.
These offers are so tempting,
Almost perfection,
An end to these problems,
Unlimited satisfaction.
I pick up the blade,
To do this evil deed,
I cut and slice,
And smile as I bleed.
I don’t feel the pain,
Just a masochistic pleasure,
My other half has won,
I am the failure.
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hardcoreputa
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2003-11-21 18:36:52]
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Re: scitzosuicide
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 11:58:15 PM AEST
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wow t his was friggin cool I loved this and I wish i could write like this. Dark and disturbing I loved it.
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Re: scitzosuicide
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:15:04 AM AEST
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Whoah...this was an awesome write although very disturbing and dark...take care of yourself okay.
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Re: scitzosuicide
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by Cancer on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 08:01:44 PM AEST
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guess i missed this when you posted it, but i'm glad i got a chance to read it. this was skittles (that's my highest rating). one of your best.
"I don’t feel the pain,
Just a masochistic pleasure,
My other half has won,
I am the failure."
those four lines esp grabbed me. once again, skittles.
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Re: scitzosuicide
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 09:55:32 AM AEST
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wow, incredible write..
afraid_of_fear
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