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The Traveler
Contributed by
doug
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Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 03:22:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm traveling forever
down this broken road
photographs of memories
are all I have of you
to the end of the horizon
I will surely go
I dream you have forgiven me
I know it isn't true
and when my body dies
my spirit will continue
past the lofty mountains
into the endless skies
once more before I leave
I'll tell you that I love you
and wipe away the teardrops
form out your lovely eyes
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-11-21 15:22:27]
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Re: The Traveler
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 05:10:56 PM AEST
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Sweet!!!
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Re: The Traveler
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 12:10:25 AM AEST
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Yeah a sweet write but definately a little sad too...thanks for sharing.
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Re: The Traveler
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 02:51:44 PM AEST
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oh Doug this is beautiful and so very touching you captured many feeling with this poem
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Re: The Traveler
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by Merry on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:25:05 PM AEST
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Doug,
this is certainly a bittersweet write - lovely cadence and imagery.
your friend
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