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Give away
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:41:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Today is the day I give you away
I look at you and only see
wretched decay
You ripped me apart and
broke my fragile heart
All the threats and lies
got caught up
I cannot be stuck
with such pain
a specal place for you
willl always remain
I can no longer take the blam
for something I didn't do
this isn't me it's you
Today is the day I give you away
You made our love decay
JENNA
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2003-11-21 12:41:14]
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Re: Give away
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by doug on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:10:07 PM AEST
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| good poem, i hope to read more from you |
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Re: Give away
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 02:48:19 PM AEST
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| I can fully understand where you are comming from this one. I liked the write. Conveyed the emotions perfectly for me. |
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Re: Give away
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:19:15 AM AEST
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Purgatori
Funny the last poem I wrote I called "Give Away"
Yours though is quite different in content.
Your anger and frustration came through strong--very expresive.
I am glad this was a poem of a long while ago.
Your friend
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