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Imperfection
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 11:18:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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My perfect girl,
in a perfect world....
well, maybe not quite perfect.
Cat hair makes her sneeze,
she doesn't know how to please.
Her laugh could make you cry,
her skin is very dry,
and to you I won't lie
but her humor's so wry
you'd just about want to die.
She's clumsy as can be
can't dance at parties,
walks into walls she doesn't see,
and haircurlers make her flee.
But she's my perfect girl,
perfect in every way.
I love her laugh, love her smile,
love the way she goes the mile.
She maybe obnoxious in your eyes,
but if you look closer, you'd be surprised.
She is as perfect as a human can get,
and I'll never leave her side. (not yet)
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2003-11-21 11:18:52]
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Re: Imperfection
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by doug on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:14:09 PM AEST
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| great poem , your friend doug |
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Re: Imperfection
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 04:15:29 PM AEST
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Lmao!! Now THIS is what I call true love.... beautifully done....
Jenni |
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Re: Imperfection
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:27:25 PM AEST
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| lmao. this was the perfect write. |
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