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Standing still
Contributed by
PieEater
on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 10:59:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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the world spins
i'm standing still
people die, and fall, and kill
and yet i'm still standing still
god challenges me
i'm standing still
he hits me, takes from me, no he steals
and yet i'm still standing still
i want to run
i'm standing still
i want to cry, and die, and feel
and yet i'm still standing still
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Re: Standing still
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:30:08 PM AEST (User
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You know i have felt like that many times, you wrote how i feel alot this is a great poem very real i am sure we all feel like we are standing still going nowhere no matter what we try to do we stand still love this thanks God bless |
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