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first love

Contributed by loopylou on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 10:40:03 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

i rember my eight birthday
eight years ago now
i broke up with you because i thought u were keeping secrets from me
i shouted so much i made you cry
rember yeta few hours later
2o of my friends including you jumped out from behind my sofa yelling supprise
things were so simple back in those days
when i rang your doorbell or flapped your letter box
and we go in the street and play
ah childhood romance my first love
so many silly arguments
big important ones we thought
but we always made up
my first kiss was to you
do you rember making are very own video tape
trying to sell it to the world
because we were big boys and girls
and we were so good at drama
so good at creating trouble
it took two years to drift from a fourteen yearold friendship
but you know hwat i want it back
bring back that childhood romance

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-11-21 10:40:03]
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Re: first love (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:53:55 PM AEST
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AWWWW this brings back memories, i to recall my first love the silly things we did and my first kiss from him wow i loved this brings you back to the good ole days
thank you for that great poem
God Bless

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