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Art Of The Lonely
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 07:32:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The black path of a song
Curves and revolves
The abstract meaning always there
The flowers, like a maiden raped
have bid farewell to purity
A single petal stays
To tell the story.
Always his ghost stained the shadows
Like thorns imprinted on silk.
It is whispered in the wind
The unbidden theme of lonesome
Hated grief burning the grass
As hell hounds hunt my back
Tonight I paint the saddest dreams
The saddest dreams about him.
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2003-11-21 07:32:00]
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Re: Art Of The Lonely
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 08:29:41 AM AEST
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| such sadness fills your beautiful words. Awesome piece of work! Marvelous poem! |
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Re: Art Of The Lonely
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by Ronald on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 10:13:44 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem!! Keep those poems coming pal! |
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Re: Art Of The Lonely
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 11:24:16 AM AEST
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Oh Ave.....
why is it that you can always make me cry when ten reruns of city of angels can't? i know you think about him and miss him every moment, I do too...but keep strong and you will overcome this pain one day...i'm just so damn impressed that you can smile so genuinely in front us and yet show how you really feel in your writing. My window's always open sweetheart, ya know that.....i'm always here for you, my little imouto. |
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Re: Art Of The Lonely
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by doug on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 11:01:49 PM AEST
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this is a great great poem , and i do believe
i'll read it again |
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Re: Art Of The Lonely
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 01:10:12 PM AEST
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| beautifully written and eloquently expressed with some powerful imagery here. an excellent write, and a style that reminds me a little of my own work. hope to read more from you soon, Kate x |
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Re: Art Of The Lonely
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by Justalady on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:59:38 AM AEST
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So easy to read and so easy to let a tear fall. Beautiful in a haunting way.
Justalady |
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Re: Art Of The Lonely
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by silent on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 09:44:58 AM AEST
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You my friend, have written one of the most captivating poems i have read in a long time. This is such a sad write, but with such vivid imagry, perfect in my mind. i love the lines " The flowers, like a maiden raped
have bid farewell to purity
A single petal stays
To tell the story."
Beautifully written,
Silent
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