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tree of agony
Contributed by
tWiStEd
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Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:16:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I patiently waited along the huge mango tree for you.
hoping that your shadow will come upon...
but hours passed...
rain began to fall
as i wept away my tears...
now that i am sure you are not coming..
now i know that you have forgotten me.
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tWiStEd
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2003-11-21 00:16:40]
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Re: tree of agony
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by doug on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 12:25:49 AM AEST
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this is great, i really liked it
your friend doug |
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Re: tree of agony
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by hazelnut on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 01:03:41 AM AEST
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| sad....as the hours tick by |
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Re: tree of agony
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by garyh on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:31:43 AM AEST
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| i like this poem... really sad.. personally i think the guy is an ***** for doing it... but oh well ;) |
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Re: tree of agony
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by klei on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 05:26:22 AM AEST
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| sad poetry.. ummm.. that's all.. thenk you! |
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