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The Hand
Contributed by
Terry_Stephen_Driscoll
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:56:51 PM in AEST
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The hand that punched her face with force
That ripped her hair from painful roots
That grasped her throat in throttling rage
That pushed the knife against her skin
That beat from her the love he gave
That left a bleeding crippled heart
Was once the hand that led her safe
From walls of shadowed debutantes
Onto a glittered dancing floor of dreams
That placed upon her finger fast
With promised joy and happiness
A band of gold, for love, for evermore
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2003-11-20 21:56:51]
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Re: The Hand
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by sindi-selde on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 10:05:32 PM AEST
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I like...
I only have one question.
Which are you?
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Re: The Hand
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by desire on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:34:54 AM AEST
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| i like this you are quite crafty with words, i love the whole backwards thing you have done from the end result to the beginnig when all was well..this is very good |
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