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A New Me
Contributed by
bbullgirl05
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Some have "junk in the trunk"
and mines somewhere in the car.
Some say they are fat,
yea may be next to a 4 year old.
The media putting sociological pressures,
which actually seems to make society eat more.
I am no obese cow,
but i don't have room to judge.
I want a new me,
not for the media or society
I want a new me
for me
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Re: A New Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:29:27 PM AEST (User
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I liked the sarcastic humor in your write and the last two lines are great
"I want a new me
for me" |
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