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Murder Plot
Contributed by
sugar0986
on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 08:47:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I’ve never had theses thoughts before,
It scares me,
And I’m nervous.
I look into you eyes,
And it makes me think of hate,
And not wanting to be with you.
I watch your every move,
You take,
Like a hawk that stocks its prey.
Examing your every move closely.
As I plot my plan,
To murder you.
You have no idea,
What’s about to happen.
My little innocent sweetheart.
I hope you enjoy you last breath,
As the knife gently slides into you heart.
You fall to the ground, asking why?
As I just stare at you and laugh,
Watching you slowly die and say you last pray.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2003-11-20 20:47:16]
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Re: Murder Plot
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:05:24 PM AEST
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| an interesting subject not many write murder poems, it could have used verses though |
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Re: Murder Plot
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by sugar0986 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:55:25 PM AEST
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I know that this poem could have been alot better, but for some strange reason, I've lost a lot of my inspiration to write poetry, it's like i've lost all my ideas, I think that i'm having alittle bit of writers block at the moment. I mean i love to write poetry.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Murder Plot
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by xander on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 08:33:46 AM AEST
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| i thought it was interesting.....i can relate to those feelings.... |
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Re: Murder Plot
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:17:07 PM AEST
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| I thought this was a great write. You write excellent dark poetry. *S* Cynthia |
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