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Strychnine Angel
Contributed by
ArdRi79
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:10:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Only the beautifull die young
in detached minds, haemorrhaging apathy
in a bloody gift of mercy
Pale skin covers piercing cheekbones
and closed eyes sunken in sockets, hide a revelation
in a congealing mind
with fading roses the only reminder
of passing immortal beauty
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2003-11-20 18:10:01]
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Re: Strychnine Angel
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:38:36 PM AEST
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I loved this. A beautiful, blunt, refreshingly to-the-point-yet-still-figuratively-poetic write.
"with fading roses the only reminder
of passing immortal beauty"
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Re: Strychnine Angel
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:37:04 PM AEST
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Must say this is a beautiful write!!!!!
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