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lost in hope
Contributed by
misstressdistrubed
on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:30:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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i am lost in hope
and i cant know faith
i am with out a god
am i doing this all wrong
i am lost in hope
and its more than i can bare
i cant find salvation in life
am i living my life right
i am lost in hope
and i want to know why
i am wondering how i must live
if i can be me am i doing it right
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Re: lost in hope
(User Rating: 1 ) by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:25:35 PM AEST (User
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I really like the sentiment in your poem its well structured too I like the way only the last line of verses 2 and 3 rhymed, it brought the ending together well for me |
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