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Revengeful Misery
Contributed by
garyh
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Thy misery grows deep
How can this be and nothing great
The hatred of thy soul is wider than believed
No coming out nor coming close
Hurt thy and thou shall die
Die within thy heart and mind
Hate thy and thou shall be hated
Kill thy confidence and I’ll kill your heart
Destruction is bliss
Thy destruction is greater than thou hate
Spite thy and thou shall depart from life
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Re: Revengeful Misery
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:21:26 PM AEST
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| I like the way you used thy here and the last two lines bring it together well |
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Re: Revengeful Misery
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by RochelleLloyd on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:04:05 AM AEST
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I agree with the other poster on this one...
There aren't too many things I follow well that use the Thy and Thou but with this one, I followed well. I like it. |
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