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Sold My Soul
Contributed by
rachelreed1
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 01:15:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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As the DEVIL whispers into my ear.
Down my check falls a blood-stained tear.
The taunting,
The tainting,
The indescribable threats.
Constantly repeating that my soul is his and
that I have horrifing debts.
The feeling of his presence sends chills down my spine.
He has a waiting list and I am the one next in line.
I pray to GOD to save me from my fate.
But there's no response, I guess it's to late.
I searched and searched for a way to leave.
But each time I tried I did not achieve.
I knew soon I was to go.
Then as suspected the DEVIL did show.
Now in the firey flames of HELL.
Through this poem you I tell.
Do not give in to temptation and sell your soul.
Beacuse if you do, you have dug your own grave; an endless hole.
Copyright ©
rachelreed1
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2003-11-20 13:15:51]
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Re: Sold My Soul
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by MrWrite on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 03:12:32 PM AEST
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| I only have one word to say about this poem: WOW. The language you used was incredibly descriptive. Great stuff! |
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Re: Sold My Soul
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 03:16:43 PM AEST
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| awsome imagery and it got your point across while chilling my soul :) |
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Re: Sold My Soul
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:04:55 PM AEST
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Agreed.... a sensational work of art, rachel, you did great =)
God bless,
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