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Lost Soul
Contributed by
rachelreed1
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:38:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Sin forgotten
Only self remains
Careless actions
Anger, hate
Demons rampage
No, not pitch forks & pointy tails
But us, foul mouthed dirty heathens
Lost souls in a world of constant change
No way out
Even in death Hell will rekindle the eternal sin within
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Re: Lost Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:33:23 PM AEST (User
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I love the way you phrased this the rhyming structure is great
"Sin forgotten
Only self remains"
those are great lines
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