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Ragnarok
Contributed by
Daniel_Brabble
on
Sunday, 25th August 2002 @ 08:44:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A field of the slain
Scarlet tears wept in vain
Charred ashes
The desecration
of all held sacred
Fallacy
Mockery of mortality
Ghostly moon haunts
a sunset of crimson fire
The blasted landscape
of twisted bodies
and blood-soaked stone
Silence amidst
the dying echoes
of a great war waged
A single feather
spirals down in the aftermath
Finds earth
Death reigns
the only victor
Copyright ©
Daniel_Brabble
... [
2002-08-25 20:44:15]
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Re: Ragnarok
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by Heather_Victoria_Lovett on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 06:40:13 AM AEST
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| This is rather dark, I was surprised when I read it. I can't say the subject is one of my favorites, but I have to admit it's well written and I can picture the scene in my mind. (not that I want to) You write amazing poetry, Daniel, even the dark ones. :) |
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Re: Ragnarok
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 12:30:18 AM AEST
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| ooooooh..bone chilling!! |
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Re: Ragnarok
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 29th August 2002 @ 10:32:11 PM AEST
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Wooo Daniel, you write so well.
Chrissie x |
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