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Whispery Entrails
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 08:54:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Which path do you claim to follow?
Which method, how clear?
How do you know where you want to go
If all you shall know is your fear?
To follow him not
The path some embrace
To battle the lot
To revel in grace
Our successor has left us
And trailed with him, tears
Wetting the passage
And easing man's wears
He's left us his message
Encoded in sand
The desert to toil accross
--His one last errand--
Copyright ©
EternitysLyre
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2003-11-20 08:54:47]
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Re: Whispery Entrails
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by joydeep_nath on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:24:19 AM AEST
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| beautifull poem... |
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Re: Whispery Entrails
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 03:32:11 PM AEST
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You put the word grace in this piece.To me this poem has a certain grace too
Thx for sharing |
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Re: Whispery Entrails
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 09:28:34 AM AEST
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Simple and Elegant verse. The 3rd stanza is just beautiful and packed full of depth and meaning- very well done. I love it.
Laurie
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