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Cold Sweat

Contributed by zaowhvn on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:43:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I realize I'm up to my eyes in love with you as they start to overflow
Cold is the concrete
The night's gone with no sign of morning
My heart is in my throat and
My stomach has turned inside out
I will never reach that nirvana ever again
Do you know how bad that hurts?
You say you know how I feel
So why is it so easy for you to drive the nail
Crucified
Dying is a privilage to what I have to live
the rest of my life with
Unbalanced In a state of
Was it worth it?

OH MY GOD
I MISS YOUR SKIN SO MUCH

Writing those words was one of the hardest things
I've ever done
Pictures bring content and misery making me
Hate that I wish I never met you
What do I do now?
Where do I go from here?
What am I supposed to do with all this love for you?
I wish you could tell me without having to hear it
Cold on the curb questioning
Confusion of familiar feelings
Anything out of the blue seems brighter than
What brings me back is anything out of the black

Never say forever

Copyright © zaowhvn ... [ 2003-11-20 06:43:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cold Sweat (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 07:35:26 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for what had happened to you. Well, sometimes in life I guess, we face lots of disappointments... Hope you'll feel better soon. By the way, you expressed yourself well in this poem. Great poem...

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